Compassion
The results of compassion40 total reviews
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Debi, with the world going mad, your acrostic is timely and your message is clear. Of note:
O ffer rainbows, not the rain
(Nice)
Well done. Congratulations on your win. Xo. M
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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Hi Debi, with the world going mad, your acrostic is timely and your message is clear. Of note:
O ffer rainbows, not the rain
(Nice)
Well done. Congratulations on your win. Xo. M
Comment Written 22-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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Hey my sweet SOTU, I need to apologize for this being so late. I only had two that were so far back, but sometimes it is hard when new ones come in to know what is still out there.
Thanks for being so sweet with this one. I appreciate the congrats too, dear sister. You are the best. I hope you always know that. Love, Debi
Comment from Frank Malley
Ms. Marquette undertakes a rhyming challenge that has to maintain a thematic focus in "Compassion." I think her assiduous attention to rhyme and meter make this pedagogical poem a bit sing-song, and compassion is a topic that requests a certain gravity of movement and phrase. Compassion can be epitomized by endless captivating and individual examples, and such examples would be more powerful than what is achieved within this poem that makes compassion more direct and simple than it truly is likely to be. (By the way: Hi, Debi!)
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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Ms. Marquette undertakes a rhyming challenge that has to maintain a thematic focus in "Compassion." I think her assiduous attention to rhyme and meter make this pedagogical poem a bit sing-song, and compassion is a topic that requests a certain gravity of movement and phrase. Compassion can be epitomized by endless captivating and individual examples, and such examples would be more powerful than what is achieved within this poem that makes compassion more direct and simple than it truly is likely to be. (By the way: Hi, Debi!)
Comment Written 22-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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Hahahahaha! Oh, Frank, I do miss you something fierce. You are maybe right, but you should know me by now that I write from my heart and it may never change. But don't you dare ever give up trying to get me to
. Actually I may have won the contest and yes, I did it in perfect meter and monoryhme, but I agree I was in a bit of a head fog that day, so I happen to agree with some of what you said. But boy, if that is what it takes to get you over to my side, I will screw up more often. LOL...
Gosh, I love you Frank, and like I said, I sure have missed you but haven't had a chance to review much as my lupus has been causing me problems so I am just happy to be still writing.
But don't you get soft on me. I hope you give me the benefit of your knowledge more often. Thank you. Now I will try to come see you soon.
Take care and thank you, my treasured friend. Love, Debi
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You?re a treasure, Debi. Love, Frank
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Debi
This is a well done.acrostic. It define the word and reminds who taught us about it. The picture shows even the kids understand this, sometimes better than adults do.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day
Joan
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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Hi Debi
This is a well done.acrostic. It define the word and reminds who taught us about it. The picture shows even the kids understand this, sometimes better than adults do.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day
Joan
Comment Written 22-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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Hi Joan, I am sorry this is so late, but I got a little bit behind and I hope you know how much I always appreciate you, my dear friend and neighbor from MN. Take care and thanks again!
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Hi Debi,
No worries on being late and you're welcome.
Joan
Comment from gansach
This is a wonderful acrostic poem and certainly deserves all the accolades. The accompanying picture is so sweet and perfectly complements the poem. Each line is expressive and urges us to be compassionate. Very well done!
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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This is a wonderful acrostic poem and certainly deserves all the accolades. The accompanying picture is so sweet and perfectly complements the poem. Each line is expressive and urges us to be compassionate. Very well done!
Comment Written 22-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much for the very kind comments for my compassionate acrostic. I appreciate it very much. Debi
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Thank you so much for the very kind comments for my compassionate acrostic. I appreciate it very much. Debi
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation, Debi.
-Congratulations on the win.
-You did a good job with this acrostic.
-A good topic, font choices, and rhyme.
-You show a lot of compassion in your poem,
beginning with the first line.
-You also make a good point about
not complaining when so many others
have situations beyond their control
and have worse hardships to bear.
-I like the line about rainbows and
the concluding line.
-Very well done; I can see why you won!!
-Have a great day and rest of your week.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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-Nice image and presentation, Debi.
-Congratulations on the win.
-You did a good job with this acrostic.
-A good topic, font choices, and rhyme.
-You show a lot of compassion in your poem,
beginning with the first line.
-You also make a good point about
not complaining when so many others
have situations beyond their control
and have worse hardships to bear.
-I like the line about rainbows and
the concluding line.
-Very well done; I can see why you won!!
-Have a great day and rest of your week.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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Dearest Pam, I truly appreciate you so much. I think you may be my fav. Reviewer and I don't tell you enough. So thank you so much for the very kind comments for my compassionate acrostic. I appreciate it very much.
Much love and hugs. Debi
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Dearest Pam, I truly appreciate you so much. I think you may be my fav. Reviewer and I don't tell you enough. So thank you so much for the very kind comments for my compassionate acrostic. I appreciate it very much.
Much love and hugs. Debi
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You are very welcome, Debi, and I appreciate your reply. Love and hugs back to you.
Comment from Terry Reilly
I really enjoyed this, Debi. Very inventive and resourceful to maintain the one rhyme scheme throughout the offering. A deserved winner, in my book. Well done!
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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I really enjoyed this, Debi. Very inventive and resourceful to maintain the one rhyme scheme throughout the offering. A deserved winner, in my book. Well done!
Comment Written 22-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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Terry thank you so much for the very kind comments for my compassionate acrostic. I appreciate it very much. Debi
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Terry thank you so much for the very kind comments for my compassionate acrostic. I appreciate it very much. Debi
Comment from karenina
Hey! Congratulations on the win, Debi!
Your presentation is phenomenal.
Not only rhymed, but mono-rhymed!
The message is something the entire world should heed...
Karenina
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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Hey! Congratulations on the win, Debi!
Your presentation is phenomenal.
Not only rhymed, but mono-rhymed!
The message is something the entire world should heed...
Karenina
Comment Written 22-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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Karenina, thank you so much for the very kind comments for my compassionate acrostic. I appreciate it very much. And I appreciate you very much too!! Lotsa love, Debi
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Karenina, thank you so much for the very kind comments for my compassionate acrostic. I appreciate it very much. And I appreciate you very much too!! Lotsa love, Debi
Comment from Douglas Goff
This is quite the compassionate acrostic poem.
And you even managed to place a picture of a cat, thusly winning over Fanstorians across the board!
Ha!
Good stuff.
D
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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This is quite the compassionate acrostic poem.
And you even managed to place a picture of a cat, thusly winning over Fanstorians across the board!
Ha!
Good stuff.
D
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Dearest Douglas. Actually I picked the picture because it looked like a compassionate picture. I didn't care if it was a cat or a horse, as long as it showed compassion. LOL.. Silly boy, that is how I match my art to my post.
Thanks for the kind comments my friend.
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I know. I was just funnin!
Comment from Monica Chaddick
Such a beautiful and touching piece of writing. The picture is adorable. So many people lack compassion these days. We need tons more of this in the world.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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Such a beautiful and touching piece of writing. The picture is adorable. So many people lack compassion these days. We need tons more of this in the world.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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Hi Monica, thank you very much for the wonderful review and comments for my compassion poem and for the generous six stars too. You are so appreciated, my dear friend. Thanks so very much. Love,
Comment from mermaids
"Offer rainbows not the rain" is a wonderful line that gives the reader a good feeling. You have a smooth poetic flow of words that adds to the strength of your theme. Your vivid use of words clearly defines what compassion is and how important it is to be compassionate. I also like how you mention Jesus in your words.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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"Offer rainbows not the rain" is a wonderful line that gives the reader a good feeling. You have a smooth poetic flow of words that adds to the strength of your theme. Your vivid use of words clearly defines what compassion is and how important it is to be compassionate. I also like how you mention Jesus in your words.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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Elaine, thank you very much for the wonderful review and comments for my compassion poem. You are so appreciated, my dear friend. Thanks so very much. Love, Debi
