Cap'n Tess And The Pirate Rescue
Can Tess and her brother rescue their father5 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
An excellent story, and a very well written one. There was excitement and drama, sibling relationships, an element of daring, and a satisfying ending. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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An excellent story, and a very well written one. There was excitement and drama, sibling relationships, an element of daring, and a satisfying ending. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 22-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from cupa tea
It's a good story. But it lacked, to me, the feeling of being how they say, in the day. It felt more modern, as if it were happening today. Perhaps, it was due to the language or lack there of of pirate conversation. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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It's a good story. But it lacked, to me, the feeling of being how they say, in the day. It felt more modern, as if it were happening today. Perhaps, it was due to the language or lack there of of pirate conversation. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Thank you for the read and review.
Comment from FurryBunny
The story is engaging and well-written, with vivid descriptions and compelling dialogue that kept me hooked from start to finish. The dynamic between the characters is well-developed, and the tension and stakes are clear throughout. The pacing is excellent, with a satisfying resolution that left me feeling satisfied. Overall, a well-crafted and entertaining read.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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The story is engaging and well-written, with vivid descriptions and compelling dialogue that kept me hooked from start to finish. The dynamic between the characters is well-developed, and the tension and stakes are clear throughout. The pacing is excellent, with a satisfying resolution that left me feeling satisfied. Overall, a well-crafted and entertaining read.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Thank you.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
A great pirate story that is clean enough for children to read, which I noted in your author notes is your intended audience. Poor Tobias finding out the hard way what it means to be seasick.
The only suggestion I have is with this tiny word:
"Ssh.
I think in the United States we are more likely to spell it like this.
"Shh.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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A great pirate story that is clean enough for children to read, which I noted in your author notes is your intended audience. Poor Tobias finding out the hard way what it means to be seasick.
The only suggestion I have is with this tiny word:
"Ssh.
I think in the United States we are more likely to spell it like this.
"Shh.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from Mike Stevens
A whale of a pirate tale, Hull....I wrote a pirate story but played it for laughs, how successfully remains to be seen. Can only hope as successfully as you have with this fine story
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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A whale of a pirate tale, Hull....I wrote a pirate story but played it for laughs, how successfully remains to be seen. Can only hope as successfully as you have with this fine story
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Thanks so much!
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You're very welcome, Hull
