Little Ballerina
A magic nine poem11 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This magic nine poem, Little Ballerina, has the proper formatting and creates the picture of the floating dancer who can perform all that is required with great results. Nice.
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This magic nine poem, Little Ballerina, has the proper formatting and creates the picture of the floating dancer who can perform all that is required with great results. Nice.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2024
Comment from karenina
This is precious! The image, the color, your Magic Nine poem with the soft "P" alliteration throughout...
Your poem speaks of delicacy and determination...
Such a delight!
Karenina
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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This is precious! The image, the color, your Magic Nine poem with the soft "P" alliteration throughout...
Your poem speaks of delicacy and determination...
Such a delight!
Karenina
Comment Written 29-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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So glad you enjoyed this one on little ballerinas. I was never a graceful child myself. lol Thanks for dropping by to read and share your thoughts!
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I took ballet...for two classes. (LOL)
I loved it, but my klutz factor kicked in.
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi June, your poem is filled with good descriptive imagery. I could see the whole scene. I especially liked:
A ballerina full of grace,
she twirls across the stage with style
and pirouettes with perfect pace.
(This is so true. Ballerinas are so elegant. They leave me in awe.)
Well done. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. Margaret
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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Hi June, your poem is filled with good descriptive imagery. I could see the whole scene. I especially liked:
A ballerina full of grace,
she twirls across the stage with style
and pirouettes with perfect pace.
(This is so true. Ballerinas are so elegant. They leave me in awe.)
Well done. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. Margaret
Comment Written 28-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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I?m glad you enjoyed this poem on the little ballerina. Thank you for dropping by to share your thoughts. Much appreciated!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I viewed a graceful ballerina here in your imaginative poem June, like a delicate butterfly she glided across the room, a fine poem, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x x
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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I viewed a graceful ballerina here in your imaginative poem June, like a delicate butterfly she glided across the room, a fine poem, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x x
Comment Written 28-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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I?m glad you enjoyed this poem on the little ballerina. Thank you for dropping by to share your thoughts. Much appreciated!
Comment from Dr. Nad
This is a lovely poem that commemorates the art of the ballerina. It takes tremendous discipline and precision dexterity to become a ballerina. You have celebrated what most of us can appreciate but never attain. Thank you.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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This is a lovely poem that commemorates the art of the ballerina. It takes tremendous discipline and precision dexterity to become a ballerina. You have celebrated what most of us can appreciate but never attain. Thank you.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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I?m glad you enjoyed this poem on the little ballerina. Thank you for dropping by to share your thoughts. Much appreciated!
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You are most welcome!
Comment from lyenochka
A lovely Magic Nine poem with a perfect selection of rhymes that fit a ballerina - especially the place-pace lace and embrace and of course grace as ballerinas are so graceful.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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A lovely Magic Nine poem with a perfect selection of rhymes that fit a ballerina - especially the place-pace lace and embrace and of course grace as ballerinas are so graceful.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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I?m glad you enjoyed this poem on the little ballerina. Thank you for dropping by to share your thoughts. Much appreciated!
Comment from Mrs. KT
Just beautiful, June!
Your lines are written with not only the grace of a poet, but they flow with the grace of a ballerina!
How I so wanted to be a lithesome ballerina!
Well, I did study ballet, but I was never lithesome! :)
Very much enjoyed, June!
Thank you for sharing!
Fondly,
diane
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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Just beautiful, June!
Your lines are written with not only the grace of a poet, but they flow with the grace of a ballerina!
How I so wanted to be a lithesome ballerina!
Well, I did study ballet, but I was never lithesome! :)
Very much enjoyed, June!
Thank you for sharing!
Fondly,
diane
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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I?m glad you enjoyed this poem on the little ballerina. Thank you for dropping by to share your thoughts. Much appreciated!
Comment from hullabaloo22
Beautiful!
The descriptions are skilfully done to give a feeling of elegance and vitality. The final two lines do a great job of showing how a dancer must be prepared to adapt.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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Beautiful!
The descriptions are skilfully done to give a feeling of elegance and vitality. The final two lines do a great job of showing how a dancer must be prepared to adapt.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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I?m glad you enjoyed this poem on the little ballerina. Thank you for dropping by to share your thoughts. Much appreciated!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
I wasn't familiar with a Magic Nine poem before this but you did a lovely job. Nice flow to the narrative and lovely descriptions. The artwork was a nice addition. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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I wasn't familiar with a Magic Nine poem before this but you did a lovely job. Nice flow to the narrative and lovely descriptions. The artwork was a nice addition. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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I?m glad you enjoyed this poem on the little ballerina. Thank you for dropping by to share your thoughts. Much appreciated!
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very well written magic, nine poem for the club event. I wish you a very good day and I wish you a very happy Easter. May you have a wonderful Lords day. Patricia .
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This is a very well written magic, nine poem for the club event. I wish you a very good day and I wish you a very happy Easter. May you have a wonderful Lords day. Patricia .
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
