Romance Poetry posted May 5, 2024


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A choka poem for the Japanese Club

Two Swans

by June Sargent



two swans romancing

and dancing in early spring

conjure memories

of a young man with high hopes

of finding true love

I found it when I saw you

standing by the pond ~

I invited you to dance ~

and the music continues






Choka is an ancient Japanese form that was usually sung as a long poem. It could be on nature or romance.
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